Alright so, so far I've noticed that the most helpful comments for me are those that actually critique the writing I've done so far. Sometimes it's hard for people to see their own mistakes after staring at the same words for an hour or so, therefore I think it's really helpful when people suggest that I add more description to a place where I could have elaborated more, or on grammar, because let's be honest, sometimes sentences can last forever! However it is really nice to know what parts of a story are so interesting to the people who are reading it so that I might be able to continue to use that sort of writing device knowing that it works to engage, or interest a reader. I will admit that I also like the encouraging comments too...it makes me feel good knowing that I've written something good!
Also I think you can learn a lot about a person by how they post comments, such as: when a person comments on your introduction and they tell you something about themselves because it relates to your own story. So slowly, over the course of the semester you can really start to understand and know how people are, even if they didn't leave it in their introduction in the first place!
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Monday, September 28, 2015
Wednesday, September 23, 2015
Reading Diary A
This reading seems to be mostly about the bloodlines of the kings and their women. Many times the birth stories of Vyasa and his mother were repeated in order to show different ways the story is told. Vyasa's mother was born a twin from the mouth of a fish and adopted by a fisherman. This woman had Vyasa with the Brahmin Parashara who promised she would become a virgin again and she would smell sweet instead of fishy.
This led to the eventuality that a king came along and wanted her so in order to have her the king's son gave up any claims to the throne and vowed to never marry or have children. Thus Bhishma became the overseer of Satyavati's children, who all died. At which point she called out to Vyasa to take up the widows of her other sons, and then his sons became heirs to the throne instead.
Then from there one of Vyasa's sons married a woman named Kunti who birthed a son by the sun and put him in the Ganga to float away where he would end up being picked up by a woman in Anga.
It's all a whirlwind of intermixed bloodlines and a terrible fate for Bhishma, born as Devavrata!
This led to the eventuality that a king came along and wanted her so in order to have her the king's son gave up any claims to the throne and vowed to never marry or have children. Thus Bhishma became the overseer of Satyavati's children, who all died. At which point she called out to Vyasa to take up the widows of her other sons, and then his sons became heirs to the throne instead.
Then from there one of Vyasa's sons married a woman named Kunti who birthed a son by the sun and put him in the Ganga to float away where he would end up being picked up by a woman in Anga.
It's all a whirlwind of intermixed bloodlines and a terrible fate for Bhishma, born as Devavrata!
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